Early Echoes: Beta Reader Reviews
Threnavar - Book I: Threads of Fate

These early impressions come from readers who were among the first to step into the Underworld—and come back changed. Each review is a thread stitched with awe, anguish, and maybe a few tear-stained pages.

Scroll down to read what the first readers are already saying.

 

 

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This isn't a "dark romance" - this is psychological horror wrapped in myth.

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Extraordinary emotional resonance and mythological elegance

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A Perfect Emotional Crescendo.

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This is mythopoetic tragedy done right. 

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A spiritual fantasy, that reclaims death as a part of healing.

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Bobbington - chef's kiss.

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Emotionally authentic, narratively immersive and devastatingly good.  

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This book hurts. In all the right ways. 

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“A Spellbinding Debut of Heart, Power, and Poetic Fire”

Threnavar – Threads of Fate is a hauntingly beautiful and emotionally resonant fantasy that explores the delicate threads between life, death, love, and autonomy. With lyrical prose and devastating emotional depth, Naeri Mort delivers a story that is both ethereal and unflinchingly human.

At the heart of the novel is Mei, a soul torn between grief and purpose, navigating the aftermath of trauma while finding strength in her new identity as a reaper. Her journey—at once personal and cosmic—unfolds in a mythological world of gods, monsters, and ancient pacts, yet never loses sight of the most important battleground: the heart.

What makes Threnavar stand out is its profound emotional intelligence. Mort handles themes of consent, healing, power, and forgiveness with rare sensitivity. The relationship between Mei and Alex is a breathtaking slow burn—raw, messy, and ultimately redemptive. Every interaction pulses with tension and vulnerability, anchored in consent and growth rather than tropes.

The worldbuilding is immersive, the magic system mysterious but coherent, and the lore rich with quiet revelations. Mort’s gift for sensory detail brings gardens of the dead, divine courts, and fractured memories to life in vivid, cinematic strokes.

Perfect for readers who crave fantasy that doesn’t shy away from emotional complexity, Threnavar – Threads of Fate is a story that lingers long after the final page. It is about more than reaping souls—it’s about reclaiming your own.

A spellbinding debut full of heart, power, and poetic fire.

Peter B., Independent Manuscript Consultant



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